I'm not a fan of WAR type but I must say that you made a great map so far

There are small things that I found rather odd or not plausible that I want to comments :
1) This structure above the castle just seem to float. I saw after that it was linked to the space ship above but the link between them is not apparent. I was thinking that the ship above retain the structure but since it is not apparent for me I think that maybe put some sort of light from the inside dome could make the link more apparent, plausible. FTM, it look bland.

2) I noticed that the water fountain is emerging clear water but the water in the pool is black... IMO, using the Necris green water color in much more better looking than dark color. If you could apply that to others rivers to, it will look even better.

3) In this little building, the stairs use all the width of the corridor forcing the in/out to the floor above only in 1 direction. If you can shrink the with by half (show in yellow) and put a support structure below the stairs, the better the flow and the look.

THX for the map

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