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    Liandri has a web site!!

    Liandri has a web site!!

    Ok...some self pimpage involved. I put this together for a final project in my Dreamweaver class. I just love to make Graphic designer students squeal when they see a multimedia major do better.

    Enjoy.

    Give me feed back. Ill fix the bugs as they come to me.

    BTW: I know the cart feature doesn't work

    #2
    :haha: pwned:up: .

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      #3
      That's really good

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        #4
        Not too bad. I think that the back ground is a tad bit dark IMO.

        :up:

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          #5
          lotsa typos, and wheneve i try to buy somthing it says 'method not allowed'

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            #6
            We need official Epic Propaganda sites.

            Still, nice.

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              #7
              Nice website. :up:

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                #8
                verry funny and original, one minor detail.

                im liandri aka xan, you own me legal rights. :up:

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                  #9
                  I have to pay a billion fat ones for a personal nuke launcher?

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                    #10
                    ROFLMAO!

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                      #11
                      Not bad at all, but I have to agree that the background is too dark. I didn't even realize there was black horizontal piping in the header until I noticed it runs through the word "Corp." and squinted at the screen.

                      On your Contact page you have your email address actually spelled out in the page source. This is a huge no-no. Look into how to get around this with JavaScript.

                      Because you used a page-building app you have some extra/unused tags that are nothing but bloat, i.e. each page is littered with many empty alt="" tags, lots of border="0" in your image tags although every browser in the world defaults to a 0 border, and there are also many self-cancelling tags like:

                      <td height="59"><img name="r12_c1" src="Images/r12_c1.jpg" width="102" height="59"...

                      If you claim an image height inside a <td> that is already the height you want the <td> to possess you don't need to declare a <td> height as the image will stretch it anyway.

                      You don't need to use </tr> or </td> tags except in special circumstances as all browsers consider a new <td> or <tr> tag to mean the last open tag is now closed.

                      Be aware that once you claim a Doc-Type (which you should, as this is the modern way of doing things) any modern browser will ignore/parse out your meta Content-Type statement, making meta content tags be nothing but bloat.

                      Also, the whole site theme is fully designed/graphical on the top, bottom and left, yet totally flat/empty on the right. It gives it an unbalanced feel.

                      I realize the point of this project was to show your design skills, not your English skills, but I couldn't help but notice a ton of poor grammar and mispellings throughout the content, such as "and unpresidented" instead of "an unprecedented" on the second weapons page.

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                        #12
                        ASMD - 2400
                        This weapon launches AI spider mines. Spider mines will seek out an enemy or crawl to a specified destination via laser guided painter. This new version of the ASMD rifle was redesigned for a more accurate primary fire and more stable secondary fire.


                        I didnt know it did that:bulb:


                        nice site overall.:up:

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                          #13
                          something is very wrong with this :

                          ASMD - 2400
                          This weapon launches AI spider mines. Spider mines will seek out an enemy or crawl to a specified destination via laser guided painter. This new version of the ASMD rifle was redesigned for a more accurate primary fire and more stable secondary fire.

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                            #14
                            Originally posted by Turmoyl
                            Not bad at all, but I have to agree that the background is too dark. I didn't even realize there was black horizontal piping in the header until I noticed it runs through the word "Corp." and squinted at the screen.

                            On your Contact page you have your email address actually spelled out in the page source. This is a huge no-no. Look into how to get around this with JavaScript.

                            Also, the whole site theme is "fleshed out" on the top, bottom and left, yet totally flat/empty on the right. It gives it an unbalanced feel.

                            I realize the point of this project was to show your design skills, not your English skills, but I couldn't help but notice a ton of poor grammar and mispellings throughout the content, such as "and unpresidented" instead of "an unprecedented" on the second weapons page.
                            Thx for the feedback.


                            You’re absolutely right. It is dark...but I had to figure in that the majority of users out there have their monitors way too bright. It's a gamble for sure. It's dark on my monitor as well.

                            It is unbalance...but the assignment was a 760x XXX site...so I had to crop. I'm hoping that after I turn it in and have it graded I can make it a stretch page like most E-commerce sites.

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                              #15
                              Originally posted by cAm
                              ASMD - 2400
                              This weapon launches AI spider mines. Spider mines will seek out an enemy or crawl to a specified destination via laser guided painter. This new version of the ASMD rifle was redesigned for a more accurate primary fire and more stable secondary fire.


                              I didnt know it did that:bulb:


                              nice site overall.:up:
                              Fixed
                              Thx guys

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