First Level!!! (sort of)

[Alienated Phreak]

This is most of my first level ever!!! I'm making a game based off of Teotl's The Ball and Valve's Portal. As you can see, I still need to texture everything, but I've got the structure done.
Please let me know what you think, and feel free to throw it right at me.

Here's the vid:
http://yfrog.com/izudk20101015231540z
(BTW: I really screwed up the end with the pipe, I know, I had different versions of the Mp3 and forgot about it, I'll attack it tomorrow).

[ledtc]

hmmm its strange but i guess its an start

[Hegen]

Level real sucks

[Hourences]

Heh, nice combination of the two

Now finish it

[Alienated Phreak]

I'll have part two done by the end of the week, or a revised version of this one..

And thank you ledtc and Hourences.

PS Hourences: Can't wait for the ball, its gonna be epic!!!

[Phylik]

Looks Portal like

[Alienated Phreak]

Update: Working on other project and will be entering it in a contest (Instructables' Halloween Contest) so I won't get back to this until November 8th, but I'll get straight back to this when I'm done.

[Dr3d1337]

The Voice gets really annoying after awhile. Other then that, for a basic concept. It's a pretty neat idea.

[Alienated Phreak]

Thanks, and I'll look for a better text2speech, you're right.