I think it's looking quite good, I just think the night is too bright for my taste (then again, ALL games' nights are IMO. seems to be a trend and I don't know if I'm the only one that doesn't like it!)
other than that there seems to be very little playing space so it's hard to critizice as a 'game level', and looks more like a beauty shot
While I enjoy the not-too-dark nights in various RPGs (because it usually makes environments look better that way and provides better gameplay than realistic dark night), I have to agree that your scene is too bright. Aside from background picture with stars, it looks almost as daylight scene would. I suggest decreasing overall scene lighting, then experiment a little with lantern light power.
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