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    By the way, if I was going to include a canon character, what character should I include? Cros, you said Baird and Cole were mainstream - I want to avoid that for this story. Who are some characters who haven't had enough background
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    I wouldn't want to hold a conversation with him. All logic goes out the window.

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    I know exactly what I'm writing my story about. And it's going to continue off of another person's fan fiction.
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    Quote Originally Posted by N1ssassa View Post
    I know exactly what I'm writing my story about. And it's going to continue off of another person's fan fiction.
    You might want to get their permission.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DragonzZilla View Post
    By the way, if I was going to include a canon character, what character should I include? Cros, you said Baird and Cole were mainstream - I want to avoid that for this story. Who are some characters who haven't had enough background
    You can't just shove a character into your story because you need a canon character. What kind of story are you doing? What kind of character would fit best for the part?

    Adding a canon character in only because the readers will know them isn't the right way to go.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sgt. Grub k1ller View Post
    You can't just shove a character into your story because you need a canon character. What kind of story are you doing? What kind of character would fit best for the part?

    Adding a canon character in only because the readers will know them isn't the right way to go.
    I got it figured out actually.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Croswynd View Post
    Ah, my ploy worked. You're here. Where's your entry?


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    Quote Originally Posted by SKORGE View Post
    Waiting for June...
    Well, it's June. Work on revenge, K?

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    Well, it's extending someone else's story, but also essentially fleshing out the character's history drawing on various statements and feelings expressed in the novels.
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    Hey folks!!!
    You missed me?
    Who'da thought that I could get so much writing done on Honeymoon. So the good news is that very soon, expect a couple of new chapters for Nowhere to Run. I just need to link a couple of things and the chapter will be ready to be posted!! yey!! It has taken me a while to readdress my writing style. Trying to stop lengthening sentences with a comma has been my fatal flaw and trying to overcome it has been a challenge. But I think I'm improving. I am very grateful to Cros for his criticism.

    Anyway, that said, I'm back and raring to go.

    What's our topic for this month??

    Hmmmm Revenge.... Interesting....
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    Welcome back! Hope you had a lovely time!

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    Welcome back to the fold, Rusti. Glad to see you back and bearing gifts of your imagination, no less!

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    I take it no one has finished?
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    Still have a week.

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    Well I'll try to get it done. For you.
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    The one time I decide to join back into the forums, there's only a week left for the writing competition

    I'm sorry, but I just don't like Karen Traviss. I don't like her work. Deal with it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Fire Kunai View Post
    The one time I decide to join back into the forums, there's only a week left for the writing competition
    No worries, there's one of these every month. Hence the name, "Monthly Assignment"

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    Speaking of which what is the theme this month?

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    Speaking of which what is the theme this month?

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    I think it's "revenge". I have an idea about a shadowy stranger known only as "Crow". And no, it has nothing to do with "The Crow" by James O'Barr.

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    ^Rrriiiggghhhttt!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jonesybites View Post
    ^Rrriiiggghhhttt!
    I know, it seems very suspicious to have a main protagonist called "Crow" in a story about revenge.

    But hey, he used to be called "Shaman" at one point. Until I decided it sounded kinda crappy. Maybe I'll change it again. Sometimes I use placeholder names until I can come up with something better. Nine times outta ten though... I never do, and the name sticks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sgt. Grub k1ller View Post
    No worries, there's one of these every month. Hence the name, "Monthly Assignment"

    Ah right. Well, I might try and put something together anyway

    I'm sorry, but I just don't like Karen Traviss. I don't like her work. Deal with it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Fire Kunai View Post

    Ah right. Well, I might try and put something together anyway
    If you win you win signed Gears novels! Not many people get the time to write something to enter with either, so anyone who does enter and has a decent story has a pretty good chance of winning. It's a kind of win win.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheRealBigBoss View Post
    I know, it seems very suspicious to have a main protagonist called "Crow" in a story about revenge.

    But hey, he used to be called "Shaman" at one point. Until I decided it sounded kinda crappy. Maybe I'll change it again. Sometimes I use placeholder names until I can come up with something better. Nine times outta ten though... I never do, and the name sticks.
    Shaman vs. Crow...?

    Ok, you got a point.

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    This may seem like a really nooby question but say I manage to put something together, where do I put it/who do I send it to? :/

    I'm sorry, but I just don't like Karen Traviss. I don't like her work. Deal with it.


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    Information is on the first page, my dear. Conversely, you could click the link in my signature.

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    Cool, I see now. It's a wonder I didn't notice that before

    I'm sorry, but I just don't like Karen Traviss. I don't like her work. Deal with it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by TheRealBigBoss View Post
    I think it's "revenge". I have an idea about a shadowy stranger known only as "Crow". And no, it has nothing to do with "The Crow" by James O'Barr.
    Hey, the Crow was a sick movie. Just wish it had more shooting and less "boohoo-boohoo, rain, boohoo".
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    Quote Originally Posted by SKORGE View Post
    Hey, the Crow was a sick movie. Just wish it had more shooting and less "boohoo-boohoo, rain, boohoo".
    Heeeeyyy!!!

    "boohoo-boohoo, rain, boohoo" is about 90% of all my stories.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheRealBigBoss View Post
    Heeeeyyy!!!

    "boohoo-boohoo, rain, boohoo" is about 90% of all my stories.
    No, 90% of your stories still need to be finished!
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    Quote Originally Posted by SKORGE View Post
    No, 90% of your stories still need to be finished!
    Speaking of, where's my Tower update, SKORGE?

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheRealBigBoss View Post
    Heeeeyyy!!!

    "boohoo-boohoo, rain, boohoo" is about 90% of all my stories.
    HEY! Sympathy had snow.....Speaking of that, where;s that update, eh?

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    I wonder what everyone's entries will be like.
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    I wouldn't want to hold a conversation with him. All logic goes out the window.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SKORGE View Post
    No, 90% of your stories still need to be finished!
    Damn but... that's harsh!

    Kinda true, but still.

    Anyways, I'll show you, GEARS REVENGE will blow your tiny mind!

    Possibly...

    Quote Originally Posted by Sgt. Grub k1ller View Post
    HEY! Sympathy had snow.....Speaking of that, where;s that update, eh?
    Hate to disappoint but actually... Sympathy had rain too.

    Speaking of Lt. Natalia Blain, I was thinking of doing a "Day in the Life" short about her. It would give some insight into how she has unlikely friends and what she was like years before Sympathy. We'll see what happens after REVENGE. Fact is I lost almost two full chapters and all drafts and notes on Sympathy when my hard drive was erased. Which sucks.

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    Ah. Sounds like excuses to me. EX-CUSES!

    Also, I can't get an entry done on time for this. Just...not enough hours in the day.

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    Me neither I've got half of it done but I'm not happy with it.

    Might sit this one out and wait for the next one instead :3

    I'm sorry, but I just don't like Karen Traviss. I don't like her work. Deal with it.


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    Still got three whole days. You can do it.

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    When do the next month's assignments get posted? I'm quite keen to get involved July's now I have some free time.
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    After June is over, the winner will pick the topic. If no one enters, I'll pick a topic. So July 1st.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Croswynd View Post
    Still got three whole days. You can do it.

    I want to but I'm moving back home for the summer over the next couple of days so I doubt I'll have much time to finish it :'( But if I finished it even after the contest ended, would you consider reading it just so I can get some feedback?

    I'm sorry, but I just don't like Karen Traviss. I don't like her work. Deal with it.



 
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