Gears of War - Shattered World[FF][ACT III - Chapter 7 posted!][Page 118]

**Jay the Arbiter** · 08-22-2010, 03:00 PM

*Opens door*

Take a guess.

*Doesn't close the door all the way*

**RaKais** · 08-22-2010, 03:01 PM

Originally Posted by Jay the Arbiter

*Opens door*

Take a guess.

*Doesn't close the door all the way*

*walks in and shuts doors*

lol what are you going on about? :P

**Jay the Arbiter** · 08-22-2010, 03:04 PM

The cheeky woman joke. I fear we may get "Torn apart" for it.

**RaKais** · 08-22-2010, 03:07 PM

Originally Posted by Jay the Arbiter

The cheeky woman joke. I fear we may get "Torn apart" for it.

I'm sure we will be fine. SKORGE on the other hand...

**SKORGE** · 08-22-2010, 03:37 PM

Originally Posted by RaKais

I'm sure we will be fine. SKORGE on the other hand...

Sexist, man of a pig.... is that all they can say? Because they'd be proving me right!

I AM THE CHAMPIONZ!

**EdieKaye** · 08-22-2010, 11:25 PM

Getting more and more into Darrius' head. I'm starting to understand him more now. I also liked the hospital scene. It shows how bad things really are and what people had to go through before the hammer strikes. Yay, Kurt's back. I don't know why I like Kurt so much. Great chapter.

**RaKais** · 08-24-2010, 06:10 PM

Don't worry, Kurt will be around. At least... for a few more chapters anyway ... Hehe

**Jay the Arbiter** · 08-24-2010, 06:10 PM

Because as we know, Plot armour and Death-proof umbrellas aren't aloud in this Fic... unless your name is Marcus Fenix.

**RaKais** · 08-24-2010, 06:20 PM

Well, Jay MAH BOI, everyone's plot armour has now disappeared now Darrius has reached Corren

(aside from Marcus Fenix', of course).

**Sgt. Grub k1ller** · 08-25-2010, 12:07 AM

Originally Posted by RaKais

Well, Jay MAH BOI, everyone's plot armour has now disappeared now Darrius has reached Corren

(aside from Marcus Fenix', of course).

And Carmine's duh.

Another great chappy RaKias. Waiting for MOAR!!!!

**RaKais** · 08-25-2010, 05:55 AM

Originally Posted by Sgt. Grub k1ller

And Carmine's duh.

Another great chappy RaKias. Waiting for MOAR!!!!

Well, Carmine is out the picture for a long time

EDIT: Woot! Over 10,000 views

**Jay the Arbiter** · 08-25-2010, 06:06 AM

Originally Posted by Sgt. Grub k1ller

And Carmine's duh.

Another great chappy RaKias. Waiting for MOAR!!!!

Clay has both plot and mega-fan-boy armour.

**RaKais** · 08-28-2010, 08:55 PM

New chapter soon folks.

**Jay the Arbiter** · 08-29-2010, 07:09 AM

Will be waiting for that.

**RaKais** · 09-02-2010, 11:05 AM

Those who have read the books may recognise a minor character ^^

**Jonesybites** · 09-02-2010, 11:08 AM

Originally Posted by RaKais

Those who have read the books may recognise a minor character ^^

Which book? I've only read JR all the way through.

**RaKais** · 09-02-2010, 11:11 AM

From JR

**SKORGE** · 09-02-2010, 05:14 PM

Originally Posted by RaKais

Those who have read the books may recognise a minor character ^^

Sgt. Kennen or nothin'!

**Levyathyn** · 09-05-2010, 06:09 PM

Ah, so this is RaK's FF. Sorry, man, I didn't even notice you had one on the first page of SandC. I'll start reading it, but my list is pretty full, so time.

**RaKais** · 09-05-2010, 06:10 PM

I dont mean to pester you into it. Of course, when you have time.

**Levyathyn** · 09-05-2010, 06:16 PM

No pestering. I liked reading, I just hate reading in a computer monitor. Maybe if I had a handheld device, this would be easier on me...*Shrug*

Nah, if I didn't want to read I wouldn't. "Right, Craig?"

**SKORGE** · 09-05-2010, 07:08 PM

Originally Posted by Levyathyn

No pestering. I liked reading, I just hate reading in a computer monitor. Maybe if I had a handheld device, this would be easier on me...*Shrug*

Nah, if I didn't want to read I wouldn't. "Right, Craig?"

My name aint Craig!

**RaKais** · 09-08-2010, 04:59 PM

Hm, I appear to have lost the motivation to continue writing this...

I don't mean I'm going to stop writing this full, before you all panic (Or cheer

), I just mean lately.

**SKORGE** · 09-09-2010, 12:33 AM

Originally Posted by RaKais

Hm, I appear to have lost the motivation to continue writing this...

I don't mean I'm going to stop writing this full, before you all panic (Or cheer

), I just mean lately.

I hate you.... you spread it all over to me, huh!? You get sick, I get sick, you start writing, I start writing, you fall down a hole, I push you down a hole, you stop the machismo, I stop the Brochimsmo...

Just becuse your English, it doesn't give you the right to treat me as a colony!

**RaKais** · 09-16-2010, 08:20 AM

Okay, I'm going to grab a Mcds, sit down and churn out the next chapter. I need to get back in the habit of writing again and I keep stalling :V

**Sgt. Grub k1ller** · 09-16-2010, 02:20 PM

Originally Posted by RaKais

Okay, I'm going to grab a Mcds, sit down and churn out the next chapter. I need to get back in the habit of writing again and I keep stalling :V

Pshh... I'e been stalling a new chapter in my FF for monthes, but I'm not complaining

In all seriousness, I plan to start a new one soon
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**SKORGE** · 09-16-2010, 07:28 PM

Originally Posted by RaKais

Okay, I'm going to grab a Mcds, sit down and churn out the next chapter. I need to get back in the habit of writing again and I keep stalling :V

Great, now I want some Subway..... and a new chapter from you...

**RaKais** · 10-10-2010, 01:25 PM

Okay. I am halfway through Chapter 7 and I have finally decided who is going to die. *evil grin*

I may have something out by tonight.

**SKORGE** · 10-10-2010, 01:50 PM

Oh teh noez! Not him.... why did you have to pick him!?

**RaKais** · 10-10-2010, 02:07 PM

You don't know who I've chosen yet SKORGIO!

**SKORGE** · 10-10-2010, 02:09 PM

But a guy can speculate... and if I say who, you'll just change it...

**RaKais** · 10-10-2010, 02:17 PM

No, I have already written a plan which I don't intend to change. You won't guess who dies so hit me with your speculations.

**SKORGE** · 10-10-2010, 02:20 PM

.... Anyone but Clay and Darruis.

**RaKais** · 10-10-2010, 02:30 PM

The only thing I will say to that is;

Clay was purposely incapacitated and put out of the story from the moment his character was shown for Gears 3. My story, whilst Darrius's events are fictional, fit nicely around the current canon timeline. So the events of Gears 1, 2 and the books happen. Hence why Clay is out the picture for now

As for the other characters? Well, you shall have to wait and see

**TheRealBigBoss** · 10-10-2010, 03:04 PM

Which means you're gonna continue it then?

I actually forget which chapter I read last, same with Jay's survival. Makes it harder to pick up again.

**RaKais** · 10-10-2010, 03:14 PM

yeah, I'm gonna continue it. I have some awesome ideas.

It would be awesome to get some feed back from someone as awesome as you Boss, but I don't mind if you have more important things to do

**SKORGE** · 10-10-2010, 03:38 PM

Yeah, well, that just means one of the secondary characters up for the chopping block... I have a feeling, the one who does indeed perish, is the one that I'll constantly bring up... but not like how Carmine is brought up ... rambling... when do you think you'll have it up?

**Jay the Arbiter** · 10-10-2010, 03:56 PM

It's about time this made a comeback!

Originally Posted by TheRealBigBoss

Which means you're gonna continue it then?

I actually forget which chapter I read last, same with Jay's survival. Makes it harder to pick up again.

Hmm, I recall you asking about Scampers, so that would be around Chapter 12-ish.

**RaKais** · 10-10-2010, 04:09 PM

Originally Posted by SKORGE

Yeah, well, that just means one of the secondary characters up for the chopping block... I have a feeling, the one who does indeed perish, is the one that I'll constantly bring up... but not like how Carmine is brought up ... rambling... when do you think you'll have it up?

I have my next chapter in progress... Working on and off as my inspiration rises and falls... I reckon in the next few hours once I get into my stride.

Don't worry, you won't find out who dies till Chapter 8 or 9

**SKORGE** · 10-10-2010, 04:30 PM

Well then.... I'll go and hide in my cave until the time calls.

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