Tears of war small chapter

**duckfoot** · 05-09-2007, 09:41 PM

Tears of war this is one of the chapters (a small one from tears of war) it includes the main character "Tyson" and a small battle between him and a berserker. Let me know what you think .
oh and i still need a cover for this presumably with locust on it.

“****!!!..., screamed Tyson, no more clips!!”
Tyson’s sweat loosened his goggles as he clambered over the wall just barley missing the locust hammer burst ammo screaming through the air.
“Eat **** “he screamed as he threw a frag and rolled behind an old hot dog stand.

He quickly turned to see where the few remaining locust had gone.
“What the hell?” he murmured to himself.
A huge creature on chains was being led through the shopping district by three drones. It shook its head up and down as if it was trying to sniff something out.
Suddenly it lurched its head towards Tyson and roared with anger!.
It lifted its arms up ripping the drones of the floor into the air screaming for their lives. Its muscles tensed and veins popped out all over its body.
Tyson put his head back behind the cover he was in and knew this thing realised he was there. He looked in front of himself and saw a huge gap between himself and the sports shop facing. Between was a huge emergence hole and faint screams and noises could be heard below in the darkness. Tyson quickly ran forward and leaped towards the sports shop only just grabbing on to the edge. Whilst hanging on he turned his head to see where the huge beast had moved to. It was no where to be seen, he turned back and pulled himself up , noticing the pair of shoes he was going to buy before the attack on sera. “SALE” it said highlighted in a luminous orange.
“Humph… typical” he whispered whilst walking past.

BOOM!!!!!!!!
Straight through the wall the huge creature came into the shop breaking a brick wall through from the groceries store. Its chains still dragging down covered in the drones blood that they had flung into the air. Tyson looked up at the creature... not in fear but in interest. Even though it was stood in front of him it appeared as though it could not see him. Tyson slowly pulled out his last remaining frag grenade and with speed tagged the supports of the shop ceiling and jumped back over to the other side.
The creature heard him and rapidly charged towards him but ... bang!!.
The supports blew bringing down the whole ceiling on the creature. Tyson stood up and held his hand over his face whilst the smoke cleared.
He could just see the monsters hand.

He turned slowly but then
RAAAAAAHHHHHH!!
Tyson swiftly maneuvered back around to watch the creatures monstrous body emerge from the loose pile of stone and charge towards him.
Tyson smiled.
The huge beast plummeted into the hole screaming on the way down.
“Damn berserker's…” said Tyson.

**The Evil Hat** · 05-09-2007, 09:47 PM

pretty good, short and a few grammar problems. paragraphs dotn shwo up on forums so double tap enetr instead, as well as write ibn a normal color. please post in the S&C forum, trust me we are nive there