2Towers

[legacy-::Ionium::]

Name: vCTF-2Towers
Version: 1.0 beta
Compatibility: UT2k4
Description: A barren wasteland with molten lava running down the middle.
Comments: ZeekyBoogyDoog
Screenshot:




Credits: Epic, for their meshes and textures
Homepage: None
Download: http://unrealplayground.com/download.php?mapid=7642

[legacy-Ein Stein]

Looking good, but just from the screenshots I have a few suggestions.

Change the colour of your distance fog to match the skybox. Maybe a dark orange?

In the first pic, chains don't do that.

[legacy-::Ionium::]

Originally posted by Ein Stein
Looking good, but just from the screenshots I have a few suggestions.

Change the colour of your distance fog to match the skybox. Maybe a dark orange?

In the first pic, chains don't do that.

The skybox fog color is 144 - 144 - 144 so I just left it that way, I might change it later, I dont know.

The chains are part of those door meshes, I cannot do much about it, since I dont model.

[legacy-foxmccloud]

um, cant you change the mesh to a brush so you can then just take the chains off? i think you just select something and presto its the red builder brush, then you might be able to tear those chains off

[legacy-::Ionium::]

Originally posted by foxmccloud
um, cant you change the mesh to a brush so you can then just take the chains off? i think you just select something and presto its the red builder brush, then you might be able to tear those chains off

But the chains make it look "unreal"

[legacy-maltliquor]

Banz0red

[legacy-foxmccloud]

what happened? why did he get banned? Was this not his own creation?

[Nathjan]

Originally posted by foxmccloud
what happened? why did he get banned?

Because he's antioch aka Agent Skully aka MadCat75 aka all the other names he's used. if you know anything about this person then you'll know why he got banned for the like 30th time.

[legacy-foxmccloud]

oh, ok. i saw a thread about this but never read it. thanks for explainin

[legacy-Ducatisto]

Ok, some critical comments.

Plus points.

Reasonably paced

Reasonable ambience.

A fair attempt at creating "your own" map.


Minus points.

Poorly built: You should have taken more time to place your meshes, many were floating leaving me to think you had a deadline to meet.

Inventory under the surface.

Single sided meshes used so when on one side you can see through them. :down:

2 ZoneInfo's? (same zone)

A link setup left from ONS-Torlan (a bit of a giveaway that one )

Apart from that a step up from redoing other authors work and a good try at something original (unless others prove otherwise).

Concentrate on finer details and you will steadily improve. :up:

Duca.


P.S. You have left your trademark author name of Agent Scully in the Level Properties as well as the map title - Torlan?

[Nathjan]

and he's back as ZeekyBoogyDoog, http://www.ataricommunity.com/forums...&userid=209018

[legacy-Ducatisto]

Originally posted by nathjan
and he's back as ZeekyBoogyDoog, http://www.ataricommunity.com/forums...&userid=209018

Well I will hold off for any undue criticism until anything untoward happens.

You never know he/she/it may well have found salvation.

[Private Tux]

Extraordinary huge landscape map of fury on the set of barren wasteland with molten lava. This map seems adequate but having few majority problems. Good at visuals and FPS to make it fast. Skybox looks decent. Bots suck. And also this map doesn't seem called "Torlan".

http://unrealtournament2004.filefron..._2Towers;56818
http://www.unrealplayground.com/foru...o=file&id=5220

PS: Map by Xalinhad, NOT Agent Scully. That's why he didn't change the author name [Xalinhad] instead of the original author [Agent Scully] who created the first. Also, it has same preview shot and same map description as the first.