brawl499
MSgt. Shooter Person

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It's just the fact that the S&C section has always been quiet, we used to get a lot of activity around pre Gears 2, but now? Not so much. Me, Boss, Jonesy and Skorge are kinda the last few around these days.

So I wouldn't worry, it's nothing to do with you. It's just quiet here.

Not a problem!

I'm one of those people that, when borrowing other people's characters, likes to get every detail done right! xD

So far, yeah things look good! Only real thing I should point out is Akvolt, like Markon, actually doesn't agree with the Human/Locust war, but chooses to keep quiet about it. (Though very reluctantly)

My memory went ages ago, seriously.

Anyway, seems like an interesting little piece! It's good you covered that Xiraan knows the human language and human technology, which counts for how he speaks. The other characters, I'd suggest laying off the "slang" to give them a more Locust feel.

Though good stuff so far!

By the way, you did mention this to DarkA117 right? Just want to double check that, since Akvolt is mentioned!

Hey brawl499 I had no idea you were on steam....cool

Happy New Years 2012 hun
May you & your family have a wonderful year.
Jill

brawl499
Merry Christmas hun =)
I hope you and your family had a Great Christmas Morning
Jill

I'll respond to your PM as soon as I get a larger duration of time on my hands. Right now, I can just access the net for a few minutes at a time.

I just felt like friending you.