Still seeking feedback for maps. Youtubes included

[Thaur]

I've noticed increased activity and new people in the forums so I am hoping some of you can give me constructive criticism on a few of my previously released SP maps. I have gone to the trouble of not only having downloadable videos but youtube streams for those who can't play them.

This community is a very small one, so I appreciate every comment, but if you do comment please make it as lengthy and informative as possible so I can gain as much knowledge as possible. If there is enough attention I will consider making another GoW SP map and also uploading videos of my other maps.

It looks like embedding youtubes is impossible.

Descent: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ajohh8gjJzA

http://dodownload.filefront.com/11587509//fe42a3e8dfddd82114f2edbd68011df3d6a5ee6b7a70f421e2 099df5e1680796123133dc3e7f310f

The Knell: (older version, new screens below) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=76tdeh6Wzck

Nergal: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VFonm0X4_94

http://dodownload.filefront.com/9795056//fe42a3e8dfddd82114f2edbd68011df3d6a5ee6b7a70f421e2 099df5e1680796123133dc3e7f310f

The full downloadable versions of the videos and rest of the maps are available at my website in my signature. Cuts were made to the youtube versions to fit them in the time limit.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs34/f/2008/236/9/f/The_Knell_and_Descent_by_myrm.jpg

[Ashrak]

Your maps are awesome man. I played Descent last night. Its short but well designed.

The Knell is awesome also but I can never finish it. I always get slaughtered by the second wave of troikas or by boomers. But its looks amazing.

Are you going to incorporate them into something larger like a campaign or something??

[Thaur]

Thanks Ashrak. If I find out how to link maps together I would make a campaign. I'm not talking about streaming in content, but rather warping the player from one map to the next. Descent is supposed to be a part of the Knell and that is why it is short, but it's much easier and more stable to just make it a smaller seperate map than paste it in.

Where were you fighting the boomers? I find the best place to fight them is from hiding behind the fountain. Climbing up to the high ground behind the two boulders is nice because of the extra grenades, but if you don't kill the boomers fast they can trap you up there and you have to pull off something crazy like a grenade tag.

[ViLLaN]

i will be playing these this week i will give you all the feedback i can on each of your maps.