MP_RiverCrossing (Bridge already taken :P)

[Phayte]

Ok, this is one of my first maps :o, dunno what to say about it really. It's a bridge, as the intellectuals amongst you can probably tell. I tried to make it as even as possible (as far as weapons and cover are concerned) and any constructive criticism is welcome :p.


http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee256/Phateful/rainybridge.jpg

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee256/Phateful/rainybridge2.jpg

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee256/Phateful/rainybridge3.jpg

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee256/Phateful/rainybridge4.jpg

EDIT: Have made the map much brighter (yet night time) and generally more evil :P
EDIT: Fixed the link, Thanks to Core2TOM

http://files.filefront.com/Ambushedwar/;10104908;/fileinfo.html

[theinterlock]

Downloading.

[Phayte]

grrr... someone please post...

[theinterlock]

Dont expect big things from this forum, sometimes seems that just a few have interest over the people that spend time developing maps.

In anyhow keep working it. Until this noon I cant test your map.

[DOOMBRINGER 8]

Okay, so from an artist standpoint, I would say you need more fillers. As far as I can tell from your screen shots, it's not gritty enough... it dosen't really look war torn you know!?
Maybe add some extra debris, lamp posts maybe, fill the background in more you know? Right now it just sort of looks empty. A good idea might be to look at some of the original MP maps or some of the other user created maps... some of these guys are really good. Not to duplicate what they've done, but just to get some ideas. So, I would look at it as unfinished, but damn good start! Keep it up.

[Phayte]

And yes, that is a redshirt the the creatures jaws

[Phayte]

and dont ask why cog are driving normal cars

[Core2TOM]

NEW LINK DOESENT WORK!!! :( please fix it fast, thanks

[Phayte]

fixed the link, thankyou for telling me :)