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msy
04-09-2008, 01:50 PM
Hi, this is my first map for Gears Of War, that map is light but for me is beautiful.

Author: Msy (msy09 in LIVE) i'm italian :D
Map name: Mp_Park
Size: 11MB (1MB RAR) :)
Download links:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=136DVKZK

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/5786/pf1wr9.th.jpg (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pf1wr9.jpg)


http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/6246/pf4bg7.th.jpg (http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pf4bg7.jpg)


http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/4033/pf3lu8.th.jpg (http://img358.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pf3lu8.jpg)


http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7244/pf2wh6.th.jpg (http://img169.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pf2wh6.jpg)

NewPCGamer
04-09-2008, 02:59 PM
congrats on your first map! It looks very good for a first, but there are some problems that you should be able to fix. The main thing that i would suggest fixing is the lighting. It looks as if you just have one big white point light which makes the map look as if it has little to no atmosphere. Id suggest giving the light a really saturated orage or yellow or maybe even blue to give it a little more. Other than that keep it up

Thaur
04-09-2008, 05:42 PM
the trees and buildings outside the walls in the first picture look amazing. However, the stuff inside looks bland. If you could bring the visual quality of the play area to that of the background it would look beautiful overall.

far
04-09-2008, 11:10 PM
welcome to the community, good effort with this ;)

Thaur
04-10-2008, 02:09 PM
welcome to the community, good effort with this ;)

he needs a proper welcoming to be initiated. Who brought the sausages and the fire ants?