Mp_fueldock

[pfilotheterrible]

Alright everyone Here is MP_Fueldock, (http://www.25tharmoredgears.com/olympus.htm)Well my first level is finally finished.so I hope you all enjoy it, let me know what you think, or if you find any lingering problems.
http://www.25tharmoredgears.com/pics.gif

Updated feb 9 2008
hey sorry for pulling a microsoft and releasing an unfinished product, but the kinks have been ironed out ad should be fine now. enjoy.

[n2cranes]

looks very cool i just bought gears of war for the pc on ebay. When i get it ill download your map

[pfilotheterrible]

Thanks i look forward to seein you on the map

[pfilotheterrible]

The 25th will be Playing fueldock wed night at 8pm ct if anyone wants in

[far]

I was kinda busy so i am sorry i was not able to play your release soon enough but now i have given it a spin. Overall it is a good fun map.

[Kronos]

Well I suppose its not that bad looking for your first map, its a bit colorful for gears, and the lighting looks like it wants to be rebuilt.

From its layout and comments, it could be possibly fun, I'll give it a download.:)

[pfilotheterrible]

thanks. the pics have actually been lightened up so details would be a little easier to seein the pics. i hope you enjoy it.

[pfilotheterrible]

ALRIGHT i have to apologize everyone i checked out the cooked version of the mp file that i uploaded and its corrupted so im going to get an uncorrupted version up asap. A sorry about the inconvienience. the new file should be up by tomorrow morning, i have to wait until i get home from work.

[MASTER DAMAGE]

That's weird because I downloaded it yesterday afternoon and it works perfectly fine for me.

[pfilotheterrible]

Really? We Loaded It Up And Tried To Play And Half Of The Cover Links Werent Working Right And In Annex It Was Missing Functions. After reading another one of your posts i figured out the problem. i never actually published or cooked the file, so ill get that done and have it up tomorrow. Thanks For The Feedback Md.

[pfilotheterrible]

Updated feb 9 2008
hey sorry for pulling a microsoft and releasing an unfinished product, but the kinks have been ironed out ad should be fine now. go ahead and download the actually finished level. if by some chance you find anything else wrong just let me know. enjoy.

[pfilotheterrible]

Any comments...suggestions... good, bad ....anything?

[MozI]

I have a comment it will a bit harsh, but before I say it I will download this tonight and play it to be more constructive than I am now.

So don't take this wrong way, it's good to see people getting into level design but as rule of thumb it is never a good idea to release your first maps... more often than not they are not that good... I know first hand back in UT 99 days my levels were lame

But don't let that stop you from mapping each map always turns out better than the last.

So my comment is that the screens on page 1 look very uninspiring. Granted I have not played the map, but to be fair I will, but a part of me is saying don't bother to play it preview screens don't look that good for a first impression.

Sorry hope that does not deter you from mapping but inspires you push the limit on design and visuals on your next level.

Cheers,

[pfilotheterrible]

so did you play it?

[pfilotheterrible]

:eek:AWESOME!!! FUELDOCK GOT ONE STAR! i rule!