DM-Broken (First Map)

[zidane01970]

This is my first map, took two days, it isn't too spectacular, but it has full bot support, and has an interesting layout I think, as you need to check all around at all times. I will be working on adding Better Decorations and so on as I get better at this.

1. Name: Broken
2. Version: Beta 1.0
3. Compatibility: UT3
4. Description: The level itself takes place inside of a Sewer Type setting, it is highly structured and fancy though to say the least. There is a small river type sewer water going through the main room, the level itself is almost a complete circle, but a few twist added in.
5. Comments: This is my first Map, I would like some tips that would help me improve it, but please keep in mind this is my very first, so it isn't ace quality.
6. Screenshot: http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i76/zidane01970/Broken-1.png
7. Credits: Me <.<
8. Homepage: Err?
9. Download: http://rapidshare.com/files/72200125/Broken.zip.html

[Phyloni]

It's not bad for a first map i suppose..

Indeed, try to add some more decoration on the ceiling/walls, like lights, more meshes, you know the drill.
Will try it out later, maybe you can upload another screenshot of a different section of the map? :)

[Crotale]

Where was the river?

I'm a bit torn on this one. In some ways it is too "clean", but then again the textures have a slight grungeness. Some of the dark areas are too dark, IMO. And what is that weird section under the spawn area by? Those black panels are not blocked and you fall through them to another corridor. Is that supposed to be the river?

[zidane01970]

If you mean the Room with the catwalks and stairs, there is a Vest under there. In the main room, with the bridges, the river (Should see it, I do anyway) is in the middle.

Edit : Just noticed lack of lighting near river, and so on, I messed up the lighting and stuff, so it seems more like a low gravity hall. New version being worked on.

[Crotale]

That's cool. At least you're trying and that is what counts.

[Sjosz]

This is one shiny high tech sewer setting!

[champdee]

cool :)